Yadon main jagti hai ratein aaj bhi,
Sawalon ke jawab dhoondhti hai aankhein aaj bhi,
Kuch pal thehrti hai zindagi aaj bhi,
Kuch palon ko jeeti hai zindagi aaj bhi,
Kano tak pahuchti hai aahtein aaj bhi,
Tanhai leti hai karwatein aaj bhi,
Palkein nam karte hai aanso aaj bhi,
Khayalon main khoye rehte harsoo aaj bhi
Muskuraht darti hai muskurane aaj bhi,
Rakhte hai zakhmo ko sirhane aaj bhi,
Sawalon ke jawab dhoondhti hai aankhein aaj bhi,
Kuch pal thehrti hai zindagi aaj bhi,
Kuch palon ko jeeti hai zindagi aaj bhi,
Kano tak pahuchti hai aahtein aaj bhi,
Tanhai leti hai karwatein aaj bhi,
Palkein nam karte hai aanso aaj bhi,
Khayalon main khoye rehte harsoo aaj bhi
Muskuraht darti hai muskurane aaj bhi,
Rakhte hai zakhmo ko sirhane aaj bhi,
Thmte thmte thak chukein hain, ab intezar hai chalne ka,
Beete kal ko bhula de aane wale aise pal ka….
7 comments:
Looking towards future. Good. Lekin intazaar aisi cheez hai jo ta-umar khatm nahi hota. Aaj intazar me ho kal ke lekin ye kal had nahi hai.
Nice style of writing.
Wah it sounds like some javed akhtars poem aap ki shayari me wo bat to hai bas shoharat milane ki der hai.so lyrics likhna kab chalu kar rahe hai janab.Kagaj to sab kale karte hai but jasbat kagaj par utarana koi aapse sikhe.Great one!!
Basssssssssss...............
Jyada Sad song likhne ki jaroorat nahi hai, bhai,
Ravi bhai sab ko bata diya ki vicky mumbai gaya hai .
oh!!!!my god aapki shayari aapki poems se pata chalta hai now ur in mumbai good vicky....Dekhna kahi thode time baad mujhe aapne dosto kahna padega mera 1 friend mumbai hai jo Lyrics Likhta hai aajkal. Anyway it was really very good...
very different to express ur self or express ur feelings.
well...nice it is but need to be in more depth is what i feel... thori si vocabulory thik karo boz for all these thing ur words should be very effective...sory to critisize u but it will improve ur skill...
take care
Nice thoughts.Can't believe its you.As the mater of fact I din't ever relize talking to you.That you can think so deep.Awsome work .keep moving ahead.Good luck.
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