Gr8 job bro.... really bahut touchy lines hai.... jo hum sab dekhte hai vo aapne bhi dekha.... but the way of looking is very different.... really u r a very keen observer....jis tarah se aapne shabdo ko simeta hai really its fabulous... i appreciate u n keep it up... good going... tkcr...
1.Dil ki jaban tum hoton se bayan nahi kar pate. karte ho to bhi kagaz ke tukde pe. tukda paucha do us ke paas jis se tum dil ki jaban bayan nahi kar pate.
2. Tere jaisa shaiyar jise kehte hai woh jadu ka khilona hai,
Romantic and effective for me. Bhai main bhi bahut dino se aisa hi kuchh likhna chah raha tha lekin feelings nahi aa rahi thi lekin koi baat nahi ab aapne likh kar mera kaam aasan kar diya hai. really impressive
10 comments:
too good!
good observation, wonderful thought, beautiful lines...
an amazing combination
aap sada likhte rahe, dil ye dua karta hai! ;)
hi.....
very nice poems... good thoughts... shows how positive u r.... be always like that...
bye....
purva..
hi vicky
good to read ur poem .........
we will here to appreciate u .......always write more poem in future ....
al d best
bye takecare........
pragati verma
lovely lines i can imagine the situation itself, ek pal ko kya shabdoo ke chadar me lapeta hai maan gaye...
Achha hai
Mousumi
Gr8 job bro....
really bahut touchy lines hai....
jo hum sab dekhte hai vo aapne bhi dekha....
but the way of looking is very different....
really u r a very keen observer....jis tarah se aapne shabdo ko simeta hai really its fabulous...
i appreciate u n keep it up...
good going...
tkcr...
1.Dil ki jaban tum hoton se bayan nahi kar pate.
karte ho to bhi kagaz ke tukde pe.
tukda paucha do us ke paas
jis se tum dil ki jaban bayan nahi kar pate.
2. Tere jaisa shaiyar jise kehte hai woh jadu ka khilona hai,
zinda ho to miti hai
marjao to sona hai.
Romantic and effective for me. Bhai main bhi bahut dino se aisa hi kuchh likhna chah raha tha lekin feelings nahi aa rahi thi lekin koi baat nahi ab aapne likh kar mera kaam aasan kar diya hai.
really impressive
oye post kar tera blog khud bhool jayega ki owner koun hai ....
hi
good to read ur poem
we will here to appreciate u .......always write more poem in future ....
al d best
bye takecare......
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