Friday, 11 May 2007

Chand ka tukda


4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Excellent,

Khush nasib ho aap aur aapki zoli, jise mila itna khubsurat chand ka tukda.

bhavna2716 said...

beautiful lines...
ek ek line hia haldi aur mehandi ki khushboo aa rahi hai aur har line shanaiya baja kar gaa rahi hai

Badhayi hoo Badhyi hoo kudos ;-)

Me Thinks.. said...

wah wah!
Us chand ke tukde se hume kab milaane vale hain aap?

Cosmos said...

bhai mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki kis par comment karoon. Templet par ya poem par. Agar kahoon to both are amazing like you.