the poem is very inspiring but i have an objection to the background u have chosen. it does not gel with the jist of the poem. purely my thoughts vikaash. keep up
though i like ur poem but i don't quite think that indians do actually feel this way. they seem to be too indifferent to whats happening to their country
i m shrud critic this time the peg is gud no doubt. but it sounds confusing in itself may be u dont think d way u have written it or somethin ..i dont c d spark which i usally c in ur poems.
HIMANSHU VIKAS SIR EACH LINE SAY SOMETHING I UNDERSTAND YOUR THINKING ABOUT COUNTRY AND THE TIME HAS COME WE HAVE TO DO SOMETHING FOR YOUR COUNTRY AND I REQUEST YOU PLEASE CONTINUE...........
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the poem is very inspiring but i have an objection to the background u have chosen. it does not gel with the jist of the poem. purely my thoughts vikaash. keep up
though i like ur poem but i don't quite think that indians do actually feel this way. they seem to be too indifferent to whats happening to their country
very nice & thoughtful; need to sharpen the blade ti impress more.
i m shrud critic this time the peg is gud no doubt. but it sounds confusing in itself may be u dont think d way u have written it or somethin ..i dont c d spark which i usally c in ur poems.
WAAH BHAAI....
TUM TO CHHUPE RUSTUM NIKLEY....
VERY NICE & CREATIVE ARTIST
I AM PROUD OF MY GREAT BROTHER & KEEP IT UP.....
PANKAJ
hi very good kep it up buddy
HIMANSHU VIKAS SIR EACH LINE SAY SOMETHING I UNDERSTAND YOUR THINKING ABOUT COUNTRY AND THE TIME HAS COME WE HAVE TO DO SOMETHING FOR YOUR COUNTRY AND I REQUEST YOU PLEASE CONTINUE...........
This poem really speaks about the soul of lost BHARTI..........
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