Photo to bada achcha hai! Last stanza is very well written, I can relate with it but not as positive as you are.. humne bhi post kiya hai.. aapke vishesh tippani ke intezaar mein hain.. kya karein, main ummidi hoon! ;)
high on positivity and beautiful poetic expressions. each and every word used is apt. love the lines - "koshish hai baandh lu ek pyara sa lamha" and "pheeke pade jo yaadon ke rang ujle hua karte the" the poem gives u a high keep up the work......
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ummamido par hi duniya kayam hai janab.... line are punching as u always do. But this post has a very good visual appeal.Good experiment!
Photo to bada achcha hai!
Last stanza is very well written, I can relate with it but not as positive as you are..
humne bhi post kiya hai..
aapke vishesh tippani ke intezaar mein hain..
kya karein, main ummidi hoon! ;)
high on positivity and beautiful poetic expressions.
each and every word used is apt.
love the lines - "koshish hai baandh lu ek pyara sa lamha" and "pheeke pade jo yaadon ke rang ujle hua karte the"
the poem gives u a high
keep up the work......
Are wah chalo padosi ko bhi blog par dekh liye. KYA YEHI DIN DEKHNE K LIYE KHUDA NE ROK RAKHA THA _eric
Are wah chalo padosi ko bhi blog par dekh liye. KYA YEHI DIN DEKHNE K LIYE KHUDA NE ROK RAKHA THA _eric
Are wah chalo padosi ko bhi blog par dekh liye. KYA YEHI DIN DEKHNE K LIYE KHUDA NE ROK RAKHA THA _eric
Excellent,
I wish to thank you on this.
Mein bhi kisi ummidon par hun, jo ab fiki padne lagi thi. lekin shayad aapki kavita ne wapas meri ummidonko nayee jindgi de di.
Mousumi
hey is this u...cant believe this wrk is ULTIMATE!!!!..1 suggetion if posible do put n xhibition of ur wrk....is this skecth made by u
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