This is the only way we can live...
maine hamesha hindi ki ans sheet me likha hai ki blah blah kavi gagar me sagar bharte hai but today i really mean it ....i like the clrs spl the picture itself speak the wordskeep on going ..
vichar achche hain lekin agar aap rhyme scheme ko dhyan mein rakhte hue likhte to aur achcha hota..
Safalta ki keemat kabhi kabhi zindagi me bahut bhari hoti hai. Lekin har baar nahi waise bhi "Bina mout ke jannat ka nazaara namumkin hai" Good thoughts
Bahot achheMousumi
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maine hamesha hindi ki ans sheet me likha hai ki blah blah kavi gagar me sagar bharte hai but today i really mean it ....
i like the clrs spl the picture itself speak the words
keep on going ..
vichar achche hain lekin agar aap rhyme scheme ko dhyan mein rakhte hue likhte to aur achcha hota..
Safalta ki keemat kabhi kabhi zindagi me bahut bhari hoti hai. Lekin har baar nahi waise bhi "Bina mout ke jannat ka nazaara namumkin hai"
Good thoughts
Bahot achhe
Mousumi
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